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  • Space Juju

    Space Juju (100)

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    Thank you so much for reading! I'm trying my hardest to improve on my writing skills! Mr. Green
    November 17th, 2012 at 06:51pm
  • leprechaun_katt

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    I liked this very much but you need to separate out your paragraphs and speech so It's not confusing :)
    November 16th, 2012 at 06:15pm
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