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  • art.addict

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    Fantastic. I loved how you really got into her head and made us really see how she can't see reality. Great job!
    December 15th, 2011 at 08:26pm
  • dig up her bones.

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    Loved it! Easy, flowing and somewhat rhyming. Nice layout, too. :3
    March 28th, 2011 at 07:28pm
  • jason todd.

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    Read it all in two hours.
    And I loved it.

    Except the last chapter says 133 I believe and the last sentence says she's 143.
    It kinda threw me off for a second.
    But if that's not right correct me.
    March 28th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • kbrice89

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    YES!

    I'M SO HAPPY!

    SHE'S NO LONGER AN 'ANA' GIRL,AND SHE STRATED EATING!

    THAT BRING'S AN BIG SMILE TO MY FACE!
    March 27th, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • kbrice89

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    133 POUNDS!

    I'm so happy for her!
    March 27th, 2011 at 11:24pm
  • VengeanceRevSyn6661

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    This is amazing.
    March 27th, 2011 at 11:23pm
  • mellybel1333

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    I love this story, the format is so great,
    Each little chapter is like a poem,
    You've got talent
    March 27th, 2011 at 11:23pm
  • kbrice89

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    Every time she gain's more pounds i clapp and shout "yay!"

    But when she lose it agian,i cry.
    March 27th, 2011 at 11:21pm
  • kbrice89

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    It make's me so sad that she don't want to eat,so much.

    *cry*/*sniff*

    I love this story...
    :)
    March 27th, 2011 at 11:00pm
  • kbrice89

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    I really like this!

    Its so...so edgey!

    Keep up the good work!

    And update soon!
    :)
    March 27th, 2011 at 10:47pm
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