You never seize to amaze me. Usually you don't go on for that long and I was impressed by the 'action' that was in this one-shot. i loved it so much. :) It was indeed intense and I would love to be in her shoes. haha
Whitney, that was fucking hot. I had to read it twice just to fully get everything in. It was probably one of the hottest thing that you've ever written, and I'm not just saying that because you used me in it. I can't even express how much I loved it.