I Want to Go Outside - Comments

I love this story more please

WHY MAX WHY????? lol
Update soon please!

let her get out of there and away from scummy men lol more please

NO, CRAIG, NO!! OMFG, what if Ronnie and FIR came and helped A7X find Clarissa? That's be awesome. XD Update soon!

moremoremoremoremormeormeormeormore please

o_o
Damnit!
I hope they get to her before Craig... also u need to update soon :P

I'm so happy that Clarissa and Gerad kissed. I hoped get together. Update soon please !!!!!!

Gah, it was so short!
I want to read MORE about what's next.
Update soon please :)

i love this story!!! ^_^
UPDATE SOON

lmao nice bad guy choice XD
Aww but they are so nice!
Well Monte was kinda a dick but everyone claimed he was just "shy" i was like "to me he acted like a dick" >.>
Anyway! Thank Jimmy Sullivan Gee isn't the bd guy... AGAIN XD :P
Update soon

DON'T TELL MATT!!!!
Hmmmm, make Andy Sixx the bad guy, he's always nice.
lolz..... not really, don't do it! Unless you want to...

Don't make Gee the bad guy, you always make him the bad guy!
Can't you just throw in another band that sucks and make them bad? lol
Like... idk, pick a sucky band! XD

Aww dont make Gee a bad guy!! If you made him young he could always be a love interest... Just sayin lol

don't make Gee a baddie!

Updates!!!! Please don't make Gerard the bad guy in this one, I kinda like him now. Please update soon!

If they went out then why can't Clarisse? Brian sounds cruel in this... and very hypocritical. Clarisse needs to go out and explore the world. I love the update though.

And I love this one too. It's so sad, she needs a life. Please update soon.

that would suck i would sneek out but thats just me lol love this udate soon

-Sniffles- thats very sad I don't know what i would do if i couldn't go outside.... Update ASAP

Dude! Amazingly amazing!!! I really Like this. Like it's my forbidden lover in story form.