I Was Breathless by the Look in Your Eye - Comments

I'm wanting an update here people! I miss my hockey!!! This. Needs. To. Be. Updated. PLEASE!!

are you going to update this story again? its really good!! :)

great update :D

I glad that you are okay after the crazy storms! I know we got hit pretty hard too but everything missed my city!
Anyway great update! As for your question I love Tazer and he is a great guy in this story but I can tell she is still hung up with Patrick. I mean as much as he messed up you can see how bad it hurts him and how he knows he screwed up and wishes things were different. I think her and Patrick are meant for each other though. And I know Jon will understand, hopefully!
But that is just my opinion!
Amanda

TOWES!!!
Great Update!
<3

love the update and i dont know for some reason im pulling for kane.

Kane! Sorry I just like the Kaner a little more than Towes.

i love this story!!
Great updates!

love the update!!

:) Hi! I don't know how I find some stories I do but I am glad I found this one. I was a bit hesitant because I know nothing about basketball but I figured since I know hockey I should give it a shot and I love Patrick Kane! So I am glad I did because this is a great story. A lot of funny lines, crazy sisters, and of course cute guys! I loved the part when Kaner was going to meet Leah for the first time!
“Don't worry, if my great personality doesn't win her over, my playoff mullet will.” He said, winking at me before walking back into his room.

“Oh nothing says, I'm a great guy for your sister, like a mullet.” I teased.

“Business in the front, party in the back baby!” He shouted, making me giggle.

God I hate his playoff Mullet but that whole scene was hilarious. I could not see Kaner getting that violent because honestly all he does is take hits or get hurt. Not much of a fighter but it is all fiction and it works with the story! I love Leah's side too. I hope Kyle isn't a jerk about the whole thing that would be stupid they are in there mid twenties well he is 30 but come on it is the 21st century, but I get the whole morals thing. But stuff happens.
Anyway I am going to stop rambling! Can't wait for an update!
Amanda
P.S. I love that video too where Franzen takes Kaner's mouth guard! Hilarious!

I all kindsa love this, it was a great update!

aww Kyle would produce cute babies :D
great update!

Looovveee :) Watching Korver as I type!!! Currently the Madhouse is chanting "Let's go Korver!" :D

like the story so far! cant wait to see what happens next with both of them :)

whoa intense.
great updates!

can i just say that i think you guys are adorable? this is a great story, i read it all today. you're both very talented, i can't wait until the next update! :)

great update!!
<3

I love this story so much!!! So much drama!! :D

i don't know why i haven't started reading this story til now!
but i'm love it :D especially Kyle Korver ;)

Patrick Kane, I have lost all respect for you, almost hitting a girl is, ughhhhh! Please Please Please update soon! :)