I'm wanting an update here people! I miss my hockey!!! This. Needs. To. Be. Updated. PLEASE!!
October 28th, 2012 at 03:57am
I Was Breathless by the Look in Your Eye - Comments
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are you going to update this story again? its really good!! :)June 4th, 2012 at 04:28pm
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great update :DJune 15th, 2011 at 07:07am
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I glad that you are okay after the crazy storms! I know we got hit pretty hard too but everything missed my city!
Anyway great update! As for your question I love Tazer and he is a great guy in this story but I can tell she is still hung up with Patrick. I mean as much as he messed up you can see how bad it hurts him and how he knows he screwed up and wishes things were different. I think her and Patrick are meant for each other though. And I know Jon will understand, hopefully!
But that is just my opinion!
AmandaJune 14th, 2011 at 05:24pm -
TOWES!!!
Great Update!
<3June 14th, 2011 at 07:37am -
love the update and i dont know for some reason im pulling for kane.June 14th, 2011 at 01:58am
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Kane! Sorry I just like the Kaner a little more than Towes.June 13th, 2011 at 11:40pm
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i love this story!!
Great updates!June 9th, 2011 at 07:06am -
love the update!!June 9th, 2011 at 06:50am
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:) Hi! I don't know how I find some stories I do but I am glad I found this one. I was a bit hesitant because I know nothing about basketball but I figured since I know hockey I should give it a shot and I love Patrick Kane! So I am glad I did because this is a great story. A lot of funny lines, crazy sisters, and of course cute guys! I loved the part when Kaner was going to meet Leah for the first time!
“Don't worry, if my great personality doesn't win her over, my playoff mullet will.” He said, winking at me before walking back into his room.
“Oh nothing says, I'm a great guy for your sister, like a mullet.” I teased.
“Business in the front, party in the back baby!” He shouted, making me giggle.
God I hate his playoff Mullet but that whole scene was hilarious. I could not see Kaner getting that violent because honestly all he does is take hits or get hurt. Not much of a fighter but it is all fiction and it works with the story! I love Leah's side too. I hope Kyle isn't a jerk about the whole thing that would be stupid they are in there mid twenties well he is 30 but come on it is the 21st century, but I get the whole morals thing. But stuff happens.
Anyway I am going to stop rambling! Can't wait for an update!
Amanda
P.S. I love that video too where Franzen takes Kaner's mouth guard! Hilarious!June 6th, 2011 at 07:48am -
I all kindsa love this, it was a great update!May 28th, 2011 at 06:26am
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aww Kyle would produce cute babies :D
great update!May 27th, 2011 at 07:19am -
Looovveee :) Watching Korver as I type!!! Currently the Madhouse is chanting "Let's go Korver!" :DMay 27th, 2011 at 03:11am
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like the story so far! cant wait to see what happens next with both of them :)May 26th, 2011 at 09:08pm
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whoa intense.
great updates!May 26th, 2011 at 03:18pm -
can i just say that i think you guys are adorable? this is a great story, i read it all today. you're both very talented, i can't wait until the next update! :)May 26th, 2011 at 05:45am
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great update!!
<3May 25th, 2011 at 07:00am -
I love this story so much!!! So much drama!! :DMay 25th, 2011 at 02:41am
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i don't know why i haven't started reading this story til now!
but i'm love it :D especially Kyle Korver ;)May 15th, 2011 at 09:30am -
Patrick Kane, I have lost all respect for you, almost hitting a girl is, ughhhhh! Please Please Please update soon! :)April 29th, 2011 at 05:11am
