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  • waves wash

    waves wash (155)

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    This was so romantic.and super fast for a relationship.Imagine if real life was like this
    April 25th, 2011 at 02:28am
  • lolamonito

    lolamonito (100)

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    Very nice! I like how you incorporated the song title into it!

    Your score:
    10/10 Originality (Is your storyline original?)
    8/10 Correct Grammar/Spelling
    9/10 Compatiblity with the song (Does the plotline fit with your song of choice?)
    10/10 Appropriateness (Does it follow the rules?)
    9/10 Character Development (Do your characters stay the same throughout the story?)
    9/10 Flow (Do you use transitions?)
    9/10 Format (Does it stay consistant throughout?)
    9/10 Layout (Is your font easy to read?)

    TOTAL: 73/80
    Good job!
    April 2nd, 2011 at 12:24am
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