And After the War - Comments

It starts off strong and I like that, my favorite like has to be "Dirty male pigs have no right to touch women," I died laughing okay xD It's really great so far, can't wait to see more

My only problem is the sudden shift from present to past tense towards the beginning. It threw me off a little. That really is the only negative thing I noticed. You're painting a lovely picture of a broken world and I hope you keep it up.