Followers Society - Comments

I couldn't help but click at the title,but yeah. Hope you can explain the story when you see this comment. The story was creative.
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As I started to read, I thought it'd be something like killings in a small town. I guess I was partially right. The story is a little.. random for a one-shot, but interesting nontheless. It kind of seemed like something was missing from it. Maybe, another chapter? I'd really love to read more, find out just WHAT they do to the victims. Maybe more of the background of the town.

Very imaginative, good job and keep writing. (:

Hah. I agree with LaRue and his rose; This one shot was defintely quite odd. You had a lot of grammatical errors and well, erm, I'll have to admit that I was left guessing throughout the whole story. Anyway, I like your layout. It's ... hmmm ... smexy :) I don't know how else to describe it. Yes, it might make me sound weird, but really, it's smexy. The faded bloody colors make it seem scary, but cool at the same time. Oh, and yeah, it's smexy. :)

LOL

Wow. That was awesome!! I am extremely glad that you asked me to comment, it was probably one of the best one-shots I have ever read. It kept my attention the entire time, it made me think, and you were so descriptive that I could picture the statue in my mind as I was reading. Very well written. I might have to take a look at some of your other work. =]

This was absoolutley beautful. There wan't anything I would change. It was thought provoking, and the detail was phenomenal. The wording was amazing. I loved everything about this. You really are a talented writer.

This is definitely interesting and I enjoyed it. I like how the sentences are short, I think it really helps add to the mood of the story. Your wording is unique, and I could never quite predict what the next sentence would contain (which is a good thing). This was definitely thought provoking. It made me think about blind faith and using that faith as justification for violence. I love the last sentence, it really tied everything together and really put a message out there. All in all, it's a great piece of writing :)

Really caught my attention all the way through. So powerful and strong, it was interesting and pretty cool all in all.

Completely different to anything I have seen on here. It's so well written and strangely beautiful.

First off, the layout made it a tad hard to read, but otherwise it was pretty cool. :D

I'm rendered speechless after reading this, mostly because now I'm stuck in thought after reading. It was odd, in a good way, and almost a bit scary. But it was very good. The Savior hiding the horrible from the world... a corrupt culture.. huh. Now I'm going to be thinking about this for a while xD

You had a few grammar mistakes, as was already stated above, but this was otherwise quite good. It would definitely make for an interesting story, if you were to go further with it.

Nice work <3

This was very odd, not bad, just odd. I'm still not quite sure how I am supposed to react to it which can be a good thing. My school's net failed so I wasn't able to use your layout unfortunately. I very like the idea of the monument there kind of hiding everything under the rug. Though there was one big thing that bothered me grammatically. You kept using it's instead of its. That was a little distracting. Besides that, I think you have a very nice premise and that you developed it well.

Wow this was a bit scary but in a good way. And thanks for commenting on my story. :3

Your grammar is a bit off in this, but I loved the story. It was very interesting. I think that the only criticism I have is that your grammar and punctuation are off. But don't let that deter you from writing or anything of the sort, that is not my intention. Just some help to better your writing ability (which is quite fine anyways). I love your wording. I really liked this, actually. I think I'll read more of your writing.

(I apologize for taking so long to comment on this, I have been distracted lately. My mind wanders off. Anyways, have a good day)

odd theme but a wonderful one nevertheless

I really enjoy this story :)

The layout made this a bit hard to read, but overall a very interesting oneshot. Excellent imagery, very enjoyable, a wonderful oneshot.

A very odd one-shot but, it kept my attention all the way through it. It could even be described as weird, but I liked it nonetheless. :]