Ima be completely honest and say I thought they were having sex at first :S I found it extremely funny how Monte's parents reacted at the dinner table when Monte told them about going on tour, 'cause honestly, I want him to propose to her, that would be sooooo sweet:) Good chapter by the way:)
dude! that's such a coincidence! you used my absolute all-time favorite song in that chapter!! i actually have it written down in a few of the upcoming chapters of my stories, and when i read that i was like O.O SHE USED 'DONT WANNA MISS A THING'! =O
lol now that my spazz moment about the song is over...
the prom flashback was really sweet, i loved it. her dress sounds lovely. boooo for lame proms -.- but at least they went to the park and had fun. her dad sounds as scary as mine hhaha. everything about this chapter was awesome, and its so great that elaine finally realizes her bestfriend is meant to be with bryan. or monte, my bad
When I was in stuck in my school's computer lab earlier today, I read this on my phone and I coudln't help but to break out in smile when I read 'Do you plan on seducing and making love to my daughter?'
This chapter was amazing ^__^
They make the cutest straight -couple- EVER! 'Cause in my imagination, Max and Montem ake the cutest couple ever:3
ANYHOWWWW. I loved the last twochapters! Dude don't apologize for the length, I totally adored the chaps anyway =] the flashback was too cute to handle haha. Yay for romantic guitar serenading! And -.o of COURSE max n Craig would pull her on stage. Lol >.> but at least now I know they're good guys! And it's amazing that Harley is now sacrificing the stability in her career and home; yet not so amazing... Why do I say that? Because the chemistry youcreate between the two leads is incredible, and I can tell without a doubt that they're so deeply inlove. You're a wonderful writer, doll. And way to go, Harley! For bein like 'gimme the resignation papers. Thanks.' lolol I was literally freaking out in my seat when she started to hesitate. I was all 'NOOOOOO DON'T LISTEN TO HER! YOU LOVE HIM, GO WITH THE WHIRLWIND ROMANCE!' and then she did and I was happy. 8D
Aaaand call me weird, but for some reason, this made me giggle: "Are you kidding me, Harley?!" Well, that caught my attention.
Yeah, I know, I'm lame...
Of course, this is also comin from the girl that draws the word 'smile' and a :) face underneath it in very fogged up window and mirror I see. LAAAAME.
I really loved this chapter, but Eliane's such a beyotch!!
Anyways, I really love Harley's character, how she's not some scene chick that thinks she super bad ass and all that, 'cause quite frankly, I read alotta fan-fics about scene kicks with super large breasts and whatnot.
With Monte, I love him. He's adoable and I love the way he treats Harley:)
okay so ive been a horrible reader! ive been reading this since chapter one but ive been in a not-very-good mood recently so i didnt comment >.< but im here to comment now. 8D
this story's amazing. i absolutely adore the relationship between Monte and Harley. its honestly a very relatable relationship. i mean, i love that monte and harley discuss REAL things that REAL people have to go through, and that the issues they encounter don't end everything or make everything. in real life, not everything is make or break, sometimes its just a matter of compromise. just like the most recent chapter..relationships are about give and take, about mutual sacrifice.
of course, its ironic, that this is coming from me, the girl who's never been kissed, much less had a relationship, and im 16.. but hey, im a-waitin'.
ANYHOW. i just love everything about this story. harley's character is really interesting, and monte is such a sweetie, even if he does have his moments. im still not sure how i feel about craig and max... like whether or not theyre good guys in this. if that makes sense >.> cuz, idk, recently ive been reading a story where theyre like...HORRIBLE PEOPLE. and its making me paranoid <.< sooo... yeah. lol. but i think theyre good guys in this, obviously, cuz in real life i love them to death, but in the story, they just talk like jerks according to their reps. aha. im lame.
OH AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING WHEN THE SUN COMES UP! i was so excited to see that xD
so this is a kinda long comment... even EYE dont write comments this long...