When The Pea Went Crazy - Comments

  • risque;

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    Well that was interesting... Hahah. I feel that you should have entered this is short stories instead of one shots. I feel that one shots are more of a romance. But anyway it was funny and good(: Mr. Grape reminded me of my friend Chad and we call him Grandpa Grape at school.
    Last I could say is keep writing and never let anybody ever tell you different.
    December 16th, 2011 at 06:20am
  • slumflower

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    Wow. It was funny but I felt like there could be more description to make it even funnier.
    November 28th, 2011 at 12:13am
  • Jessii Tara;

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    Well that wasn't expected but this was hilarious!
    November 10th, 2011 at 10:13pm
  • GoDie

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    Funny as anything i loved it! haha XD
    October 12th, 2011 at 02:55pm
  • BlazeRead

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    That. Was. Awesome! I really couldn't help but laugh at the fruit remark about the tomato! Nicely done.
    October 9th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Haha, I understand why this qualifies.
    And wow....I've never read something like this before. Ever.
    But I couldn't help but laugh at this.
    This is something that certainly lifted my spirits. Haha.
    I loved reading this.
    September 9th, 2011 at 10:15pm
  • Wounded Huntress

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    Looool! I love this! I love the Pea!
    Awful, awful cannibal it was..v.v

    Great job! =D
    July 26th, 2011 at 07:25am
  • ohthebells;

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    ohmygoodness, this just made my day loads better. (:
    June 11th, 2011 at 08:14am
  • kittykatie

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    haha, made my day... night, whatever. Thanks! :D
    May 21st, 2011 at 03:43am
  • UnderMyRoof

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    Oh gosh! I coudnt stop laughing the whole time! XD
    It's just so damn funny!
    Haha & the way you described the fruits & all,
    I just imagined myself being a fruit O.o
    Lol great short story!
    May 11th, 2011 at 12:46am
  • luminos.

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    Hahah, this one really got me going. VERY creative and a sort if witty-funny. Loved it(:
    May 10th, 2011 at 07:45pm
  • UsagiChaan

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    Oh my goodness, that was hilarious!! I read this and laughed! It was so creative and really well put together. Very nice job! :)
    May 9th, 2011 at 03:18am
  • Seretti

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    This story was very different, in a good way. I'm usually not into funny stories but this one is an exception. I have to agree with spunkysunset123; the story is creative and made me laugh :)
    May 6th, 2011 at 06:44pm
  • cRaZybugaboOoOoO;

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    yeaaaahh, canibalism is great....... O.O
    April 8th, 2011 at 02:58am
  • Mimello

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    This definitely made me laugh, thanks :P
    March 30th, 2011 at 11:06pm
  • spunkysunset123

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    Okay. I think I loved this. Haha:)
    It's so creative, imaginative and witty.
    March 30th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • Unusually._.Usual

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    Gee whiz... That was so unexpected, but very satisfying too! Good job! xD
    March 30th, 2011 at 01:59am