November 20th, 2012 at 03:27am
Red Lips - Comments
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Aright. I know I'm a bit off for liking stories like this, but wow...this was intense. The scenes were good, so no worries there, I just...scary, but you wrote it well! haha.August 11th, 2011 at 08:19am
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I decided to go stalking some other oneshots of yours because 1. I’m a stalker and 2. You’re a really good writer. *files nails* Anyway! First, I must say that I loved the layout for this one. The bright red really helped set the tone of the oneshot. Second of all, you made me cry again. xD I really hate abuse stories (but love them because they’re usually so good like this one), but this was so sick and twisted that I just adored it. I write mostly sick and twisted things, so it was right up my alley. I love the strike-out parts where he talks about how much he likes/wants/needs it. This entire oneshot is so, so powerful, and I’m off to read the sequel. Excellent job, my dear!
<3 HavenAugust 2nd, 2011 at 08:50am -
I'm a sick, dirty pervert and I think it was fucking awesome! :D
This is so super amazing, can't wait to read the sequelMay 21st, 2011 at 01:53am -
I–I–wow!
Your stories always amaze me. I agree with ameilaxhomicide :) just–wow.May 11th, 2011 at 09:16pm -
BeautifulApril 21st, 2011 at 03:36am
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^ Agreed.
I really enjoyed this.April 8th, 2011 at 11:56pm -
Holy. Fucking. Shit. This was just... Wow. I am speechless. Honestly, this was so psycho and shit that it was amazing!April 8th, 2011 at 10:59pm
You have such a beautiful way of pulling descriptions and thoughts together to make a soundless piece of music. I can't believe that you aren't getting more comments on your stories, because you deserve them :)