Are you kidding me poor attempt, I hate violence, but SLAP YOURSELF!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so fucking hotttt, I wish I was there with a video camera! The descriptives that you used for each action and emotion was just incredible! Keep writing, don't you ever give up, I have utter faith in your ability to make my imagination explode due to the fact that what I read pops right into my head as a movie or something weird like that! Now get typing sweets, I'm a fan and I am loving it!
August 12th, 2011 at 03:54am