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  • hephaestus

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    -dies for perfection-
    December 1st, 2012 at 08:29pm
  • i defy you stars.

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    okay, this is wonderful. I could go on about how much i like it but that would get boring. The final line though. wow.
    May 13th, 2011 at 04:32pm
  • wanny dorsnop.

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    This is absolutely beautiful.
    May 11th, 2011 at 12:53am
  • This.Useless.Heart.

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    :'D That was amazing. I love those two so much anyway, and your descriptions were just omg. I loved it!
    I did spot this: He should have expected them, but the thought of Kurt seeing his body scares him, because he knows that his form is nowhere near and beautiful and what will Kurt think of him? - I think it should be "nowhere near as beautiful" not "and beautiful", unless I am misreading it.
    Anywho, great work! :)
    May 7th, 2011 at 06:42am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    This was something really cute, I'll admit.
    I loved, absolutely loved, the way you described everything and how you wrote it. Because it was just amazingly cute.
    When someone's as good as a writer as you are, I tend to lack words in which to say. D:
    This was really cute, really well written, and I hope you write more like this because it was amazing! :)
    April 9th, 2011 at 08:33pm
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