Acrylic - Comments

I'm not going to lie, I don't have a single idea as to who Blaine and Kurt are. Are they famous?.. (I feel so lame asking that.) Aside from that, this was truly wonderful. The layout was simple yet very elegant and I loved how imagery is woven throughout the entire piece.

The whole storyline was adorable and you are an incredible writer. I'm so glad you recommended this to me because had you not, I don't think I would have taken the time to read it. It's fantastic, really, and you did an amazing job. <3

I love this. I don't even have the words. <3

This, was completely amazing and I'm not just saying that.
First of all, I love Kurt/Blaine, so I was really excited from the start.

Two, the storyline was great. It was just really cute, without being smut the whole time.

Your writing, is just incredible. The details you put into this was, yet again amazing. I loved all the colors that you mentioned, most of them that I'd never even known about.

I really liked the ending also, how it wasn't completely serious, it made the story.
Also, the layout was simple but really cute.

Amazing, amazing job. <3

I love it! It was absolutely wonderful. Beautifully written! I can honestly say, that was probably the best story i've read on here. It was simply amazing. I'm speechless.

Roseh, you have truly out done yourself with this. It's just more proof that you are an amazing author. This was so cute, and I'm glad I read it!

This brightened my mood; made my day; I don't think I've seen the word psychedilic in any other story, and it's jsut such an amazing word! :D I really love reading your stories, you have a style of reading that's so entriguing. YOu describe scenes and things very well! And it is very impressive!

The layout is good, and I don't think I saw that many mistakes! And the one or two I saw were just simple things that probably aren't noticeable! Great job! You are an amazing writer, that is clearly obvious.

This story was so beautiful, and I honestly don't understand why there aren't more comments on this. At some points during this, I was a bit confused as to what was going on, but I understood in the end. I don't know how to describe this, but I'll try my best.

This story made me tingle. I have only ever gotten that tingle while reading books by Stephen King. And though you may have different story plots, oh my god, you have such a good technique! I feel weak after reading this, just because of how utterly amazing it was.

The descriptions just made me feel like I was there, living the story. I don't think I even understand how awed that I am right now. I wish I had just a little speck of the talent that you have captured in your writing.

I don't get jealous often, but I am so jealous of this story. I really am. I wish I could write something short and sweet like this. It's so powerful. Please don't ever give up on writing. I love this story. I love your writing.

I like the name of this. :) It reminds me of crayons for some reason. I don't know if that's an art word or not, but that's what it makes me think of. Oh! Lookie, there's a picture of paint. Now I feel silly, haha. Oh well, at least I got the art thing right. (: <33

The layout is gorgeous;gorgeous;gorgeous. For real. <3 Readable and elegant and super organized and clean. I love it. <33

The summary snagged me. It was like, "Oh, Ava, here's a goldfish cracker if you keep reading. :)" But then again, I never had to be persuaded to read anything of yours. You're amazing! ;) <33
Onward because now I'm super duper curious as to what else he's gained. <3 (:

It has been his parents' idea, and he'd dragged

I'm not sure if 'has' is the right word in the beginning. Maybe had? If not, feel free to ignore silly little me, okay? <3(:

amongst sheets of comfort and tranquilly, resting his head upon serenity

I'm not sure why I caught this, but this line seemed off to me. You say the sketchy person could be considered a male or a female, but yet you then say it's male. I think it'd be a better continuation to say their instead of his. But, again, if I sound crazy, feel free to say so. I honestly hope I don't sound rude or picky or anything.<3333 ><

shatter his little china doll, shoulder blades so close to the edge of his skin that they look just like they want to almost break free, become wings so that the angel can fly.

This is, without question, my most favorite bit of detail in this story. It's lovely, gorgeous, stunning, mind boggling and beautiful. I know that's your writing style in a nutshell, (all those true adjectives up there) but those lines? For lack of a better word, they were like BAMF's. (: <33

My mind is like, boggled right now, missy. I love this. Most people would attempt a respective topic like this and turn it into something completely meaningless. But not you. No, you did just the opposite of that. It's like, what he gained, is appreciation. He gained something more valuable than anything for someone he seems to care about deeply so. It was really sweet and heart warming, you know. :)

You're an amazing writer and anyone who tells you otherwise has pickles for brains. Not even the good kind of pickles, either. The ones that are still slightly cucumbers and taste like rotten eggs. Yeah, those kinds of pickles are their brains if they think anything negative about your amazing writing, because it's amazing. (:

Wow! I simply love this! I love the imagery of it and the whole idea of it. I love the characters and the way that they interact. It's simply beautiful. I'm trying to find words for it, but it's really hard. I can just imagine it all in my mind and it's simply stunning. This is wonderful on every level. I really liked the idea of the angel. I think that was my favorite part of this whole thing.

Blaine's turned him into an angel. A broken angel. A fallen angel. A mirage of wings in a multitude of colours are painted there and it's strange and psychedelic and maybe even slightly creepy but oh God it's stunning and breathtaking and just so beautiful.

I honestly think this is one of the best paragraphs I have ever read in my life. I adore it. I love the whole idea of it and I strive to try and see it in my mind even though I know that my imagination can never do it justice.Brava my dear, Brava