I really like this. It is very good, and catchs the attention. also, in reading this, the southern accent comes across fine (at least to me, not that I have much of basis to the opinion, living very, very north) Anyway, please please Please update soon!
Holy shiiiizzzzzz! I've been completely captured by the first two chapters. Your writing style is so good! Though, longer paragraphs are harder to read... But whatever. I already love this book. <3