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  • Johnny in my mind.

    Johnny in my mind. (100)

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    This is a pretty awesome story. Well-written and beautiful. It was, however, a little bit confusing because you wavered a lot between first person and third with no noticeable pattern. Keep writing!
    July 27th, 2011 at 10:20pm
  • Mikey'sWay

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    I was scrolling through the Ryden tags and i found this and i just have to say, omg this is written amazingly. It made me cry and laugh and want to beat up Ry but hold him at the same time. It was just so amazing. There is no other word for it :)
    June 26th, 2011 at 05:33am
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