Well, I really definitely liked this. I don't like the ending, but that's just because I like either happy endings or very sad endings, so that's just personal preferences. Don't take it personal at all, and don't worry; it's not going to effect your overall scoring at all either. I'm really not sure what all to say about this because of how much I liked it. I'm really glad you wrote about a gay porn star as well, seeing as how a gay porn star was the initial inspiration for the contest. Okay, I can't think of anything else to say, so I'm just going to wrap this up with: I really (obviously) liked this, and you did a great job on it. Overall wonderful!
I don't like the ending, but that's just because I like either happy endings or very sad endings, so that's just personal preferences. Don't take it personal at all, and don't worry; it's not going to effect your overall scoring at all either.
I'm really not sure what all to say about this because of how much I liked it.
I'm really glad you wrote about a gay porn star as well, seeing as how a gay porn star was the initial inspiration for the contest.
Okay, I can't think of anything else to say, so I'm just going to wrap this up with:
I really (obviously) liked this, and you did a great job on it. Overall wonderful!