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  • Zacky's Beotch

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    gosh, frank was a bit of a bastard in this one, i still liked it though
    September 5th, 2010 at 11:05pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Sure, the occasional fucks every other night – but what else is there to do in prison?
    *giggle snort*

    He was proud of his crime. He was proud of murdering his mother. She deserved it.
    Such a nice thing to do to his mother *rolls eyes sarcastically*

    he had managed to lie his way out of a lie detector test

    I find that really funny for no proper reason...

    Frank grunted as he pushed himself quickly and forcefully into Frank

    Me thinks there is something slightly wrong with that sentence - Frank fucking himself

    Very good idea to change Mikey to Mike.
    Awesome one shot
    March 26th, 2008 at 12:29pm
  • frigga

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    I loved it.
    February 28th, 2008 at 01:04pm
  • My Chemical Romance

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    haha, "tougher" name for a murderer.

    Well...what a celebration. lol.
    Loved it.
    February 6th, 2008 at 08:41am
  • Lightning Zap

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    :o HOT!!!!

    I loved it :D
    February 5th, 2008 at 08:22am
  • Alice Verney

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    i dint think frikey i thought mike from green day
    February 4th, 2008 at 10:59pm
  • Freaka.

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    Is it wrong that I LIKED Frank as a baddie?
    February 4th, 2008 at 10:39pm
  • Angelus.

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    aw poor Mikey not being able to finish... Frank's mean.

    Then again, he IS a murderer i suppose...

    lol

    xoxox
    February 4th, 2008 at 10:03pm
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    I wish I could lie my way out of a polygraph machine...
    Nice job, I literally had no idea it was Mikey until the end... proves how smart I am!
    (:
    February 4th, 2008 at 10:00pm
  • Cym

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    hmm... that was hot... it was interesting how you changed their characters, since they're in prison obviously... i guess i'm always used to the in-character 'mikey' and frank... it was pretty cool though... you have a talent for descriptive writing..
    February 3rd, 2008 at 07:22am
  • Modern Myth

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    Amazing.....Really....
    Mike...Mikey...I really didn't realize that
    February 2nd, 2008 at 11:41pm
  • BurntMccookies

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    amazing.
    February 2nd, 2008 at 11:21pm