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Beautiful. I love this, so much, and I'm crying a lot right now.
I think he lives, I can imagine that.

i gunna pretend that he lived so that ill stop crying
how do ya do this? this is the forth story that you have written that has made me cry

YaY im starting to read them all and this one was just PAINFULLY BEAUTIFUL
Love ya

Ugh, Oh my God. That was so sad. But it was perfect. I don't think he makes it though. :( Gerard's kind of an ass, though.... But you're amazing and this was so nicely written.

I was about to read gunmetal and I realized I STILL DIDN'T READ THESE! So now I'm going to read the others. :D

Really enjoyed it! :D Christ I'm a sick fucker ¬_¬ xD. Part of me wants him to live, so he can live happily with Gerard, but in my heart I know he cant, he has to die, it's just not right otherwise <3

Oh, and I also think he ended up dying. I don't know why, I just do.

Oh my god I honestly don't know what the fuck to say so don't mind the rambling I'm probably about to do. This was amazing, so amazing and beautiful and perfect and heart wrenching and I usually try not to cry because I insist on being "tough" about those kinds of things because that's just me but I can't stop crying because you wrote this so realistically and it's unbelievable. I could hear and feel and taste and see the emotion in every word and everything. You have such talent and maybe I'm getting so overly ~emotional since this hits close to home and I can connect to this so very much.

The bed is white and cold and empty, besides my body – but that's fairly empty, too. The room is lacking color, since he took his paintings when he went away. The closet is half-full, there's only one dresser filled, only half of the bills are paid, his TV shows still recorded on the TiVo.

I loved how you began this, how you described immediately how much he's holding on to things, even if he doesn't want to. You are a great writer, and I'm subscribing to this so I can read this over and over.

This actually brought tears to my eyes. This is so powerful, so raw, so moving.
This is genuinely one of my favourite things I've ever read. It's brilliant. Completely heart-breaking!
I really hope he doesn't die. I'd love if there was a follow up, where he lives and Gerard's there and it's all fluffy and lovely and their in love again, but yeah, that's just wishful thinking. :P
But in my head, he lives, because I need that happy ending right now.
Thank you for sharing this, it is truly beautiful.

This actually brought tears to my eyes. This is so powerful, so raw, so moving.
This is genuinely one of my favourite things I've ever read. It's brilliant. Completely heart-breaking!
I really hope he doesn't die. I'd love if there was a follow up, where he lives and Gerard's there and it's all fluffy and lovely and their in love again, but yeah, that's just wishful thinking. :P
But in my head, he lives, because I need that happy ending right now.
Thank you for sharing this, is it truly beautiful.

noooooo, Frankie can't die! well, not in real life, at least.
if you want me to be honest, I love tragic endings; more than happy ones. so, I'd say Frankie should die. butttt, since it's Frankie and Gerard, I just can't do that :3
this story is amazing, sweet bb (:
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I almost cried, omg. i wanted to cry, but my brother came home while I was reading x]
soooooooooooo fucking beautiful
but I think he should live :o

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