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  • sofia.loves.PINK

    sofia.loves.PINK (100)

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    I don't give a flying pig, if you're on hiatus, you need to fucking update!
    July 30th, 2012 at 05:19pm
  • WriteMeALoveLetter

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    I LOVED this so far, you have to got update, i gotta know what's up with Tom XD
    i subscribed already, so you better update soon! ^^
    October 10th, 2011 at 02:12pm
  • Dusk Dawn

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    Why aren't you updating??? :(
    June 21st, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • daenerysjauregui

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    Oh.My.Freaking.Gawd.
    I'm losing it without that next chapter!
    My sanity is going down the drain!
    I stalk your page!!
    May 5th, 2011 at 09:06am
  • VampireVenus

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    Interesting! Got me wondering what they've been fighting about. Good job once again :)
    April 14th, 2011 at 09:29am
  • Dusk Dawn

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    i love it! Update faster! :D
    April 12th, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • VampireVenus

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    Wow, I'm impressed! It's so rare to see a story on here that actually follows the guidelines (maybe there was a time where you switched tenses but I didn't notice): Your spelling is spot on, you have paragraphs, its neat and easy to read, and the story though maybe a little cliche, you still keep it interesting. You have a true gift: you paint a picture but you also write it like a real person is telling a story. I like it. Keep up the good work! :)
    April 11th, 2011 at 08:29am
  • daenerysjauregui

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    WHAAAT? Only one comment???
    I love this story already!!!
    I think you should continue <3
    Pretty pretty please?? :D
    April 8th, 2011 at 08:34pm
  • dig up her bones.

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    You tend to switch tenses randomly (which you shouldn't do) and it is a little bit cliché, yeah, but the layout is nice. :)
    April 2nd, 2011 at 05:39pm
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