Two of Them - Comments

I don't give a flying pig, if you're on hiatus, you need to fucking update!

I LOVED this so far, you have to got update, i gotta know what's up with Tom XD
i subscribed already, so you better update soon! ^^

Why aren't you updating??? :(

Oh.My.Freaking.Gawd.
I'm losing it without that next chapter!
My sanity is going down the drain!
I stalk your page!!

Interesting! Got me wondering what they've been fighting about. Good job once again :)

i love it! Update faster! :D

Wow, I'm impressed! It's so rare to see a story on here that actually follows the guidelines (maybe there was a time where you switched tenses but I didn't notice): Your spelling is spot on, you have paragraphs, its neat and easy to read, and the story though maybe a little cliche, you still keep it interesting. You have a true gift: you paint a picture but you also write it like a real person is telling a story. I like it. Keep up the good work! :)

WHAAAT? Only one comment???
I love this story already!!!
I think you should continue <3
Pretty pretty please?? :D

You tend to switch tenses randomly (which you shouldn't do) and it is a little bit cliché, yeah, but the layout is nice. :)