It's Not You, It's Me - Comments

  • phung

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    This story is interesting, I can't stop reading it. :)
    February 12th, 2012 at 07:15pm
  • chelseadaggerr

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    i love this! great job! i'm totally subscribing!
    August 7th, 2011 at 05:03pm
  • Jamie...

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    love this sttttoy and the update
    April 13th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • Jamie...

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    i really like this story. infact, i love it <3
    April 5th, 2011 at 02:02am
  • tiffany danielle

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    I like the layout. <33

    The summary confused me a bit. She's straneded on an island - no one can sail to - yet, she's being sent to a boarding school? Hmm. Anyways, onward. I'd really, really like to see what happens to super social Samantha. :)

    I liked this. I liked it alot. It was really kind of interesting, you know? All this speech. I think the only thing I could recommend is that you balance everything out. You know, add in more detail? When it's just straight speech, the reader doesn't get a feel for the character - "talk is cheap" - and it's hard to tell what exactly is going on in a story - especially like this, when it seems to be so jumpy.

    Now, I only read the first chapter, but I'm sure this story gets better and better. You're an amazing writer, dearie. c: <3
    April 3rd, 2011 at 03:57am