Natural Born Killer - Comments

this deserves more comments.
anyways, i can't wait for an update!

Woah!
She is extremely possessive with the guys since she killed a suppose ex of Brian.
I do wonder what he sees in her since he let her kiss him and he responded back.
For some reason I am relieved that she killed that chick because I had a feeling that she would be hanging around a lot more.
Damn chapter ten was a freaking gruesome yet hot chapter!
Cali killing and basking in Alyssa's blood after then Zacky coming in, only to get turned on.
They are both really twisted since they had sex with a dead body in the same room as them!
I wonder if the others are like that but they have better control.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this was amazing! i love how dark and twisted it was because obviously for the two of them it couldn't have happened any other way. i think this may be one of your best stories ever

Just read this and I am in love with it. It's seriously amazing and I can't wait for more! <3

Gruesome, animalistic, but also very, very lovely XD. I don't think it could have happened any other way with them, honestly. It wouldn't have felt right if it was just 'normal' rough sex, you know? The blood play was nice as well; it certainly had an almost horror-movie-esque feel to it, which isn't a bad thing.

Fucking Brian, inadvertently starting shit lol.

More when you can ^.^

this story is so fucking hot. i am absolutely in love with the animalistic need to kill (for Cali). This story is sooooo sickkkk!!!<333

Fucking hell. That was.....
Shit.....
No words.

The gory scene itself made the chapter more interesting. Dude, I bet they're all bloody and everything. Nice! XD update! Loved it!

I now medication hallucinations, or just hallucinations in general, can be extremely terrifying and unsettling, and mine were moderate and mild. I just know that the small ones I had while I was coming off my meds would leave me feeling extremely unsettled for hours.

I'm very much so looking forward to the next update <3

When I read that Jeffrey was starting to get kind of stalkerish on her and was chasing her, I literally shrieked like a fucking banshee. I was so scared. I think that she should at least go to a doc about what just happened, so they don't get worse. at least her and jimmy are talking now. (:

Commenting. Subscribing. All that good shit. I fucking love this story. You're one KICKASS writer. Her uncle needs to learn some damn respect if you ask me. Loved the chap though. Update please

damn....... O_O

Poor Brian; I'd care for his wounds but uh...I'm dead lol.

I laughed way harder than necessary at Matt walking in on them, if only because I heard the “Oh, uh, shit. Sorry.” in his voice perfectly clear in my mind. Markus is an ass lol, I would have probably raged too. There's seriously nothing worse than people nagging on you about your 'flaws' and then having them think it's nothing but a joke.

Also, I really liked the ending of this one. It made perfect sense in my mind, if that...well, makes sense. Like the needs to take out the built up violence. I think that if Cali wasn't as strong of a person as she is, or as equally psycho as Z, then he would have probably raped her. Actually, I'm almost sure of it. Well, not almost...I'm about 100% sure lol. Which would make sense from what we know of the personality and character he has in this story. That's probably one of the most, if not THE most, violent things you could do to a person.

As always, more as soon as you can!

I rarely RARELY comment on stories but...THIS IS ABSOLUTLY AMAZING!<3
Everything about it is perfect<3
PLEASE update soon? :D

I'm just going to start calling Brian "Cockblock Gates". Seriously lol. But while he may seem like a serious ass (or pain in the ass), his reactions and behavior are understandable. While Cali might not feel much sympathy towards his behavior due to how she is, he's only acting out of worry, caring, and maybe a little bit of jealousy. He's extremely protective of her despite the fact that he knows she can handle herself, and I think he's a little frustrated that he can't understand her the way Zack can; not being able to understand a person in general can be extremely frustrating for anyone.

I enjoyed this as always. The Chronic Masturbation things was interesting to me; I learned something new today lol. And I want you to update as soon as you can :p (as always lol).

amazing amazing holy shiiiit! your story is so ncredibly sexy and mysterious. soooo hot. i cannot stop reading!!!! keep updating!!! :D

I am absolutely in love with your stories! I can't wait to read more! :)

Wooo *fans self* I should not have read this while I was in school >.< lol

Aaaanyway, I loved it, as usual. As I said before from the snippets you gave me, the sudden 180 changes in Zacky's moods are perfect; they fit so well, especially for the personality you fleshed out and it just works. The voyeuristic scene was ace, too, by the way.

I can't wait to read more of this. I'm interested if Z will ever just tell her, despite the fact that she already knows now, or if she'll make it known to him that she knows.

More soon! :p

Stumbled upon this gem thanks to Tumblr and a search for Mibba and I'm never so glad that I have. I don't usually get into dark things, but this...this has me hooked. Then again, I guess I do as I've read some of Jinx's stories and they're on the dark side sometimes... Anyway, this is amazing and I'm anxious to read the next update. I love how you write and how she's so hesitant with Zack but still drawn to him. Everything is so alive in this..the descrpitions make you feel as if you're there, seeing things, smelling them, feeling them. Amazing.

I wants more D: God it was so addicting to read, you have no idea. I don't think I've read something on mibba yet that catches my attention as fast as this story did. Keep doing what you're doing and I'ma keep reading xD

Well, I really glad that she finally got to see the guys again. Brian and Jimmy seriously crack me up in this, just like they do in most of your stories, especially with Jimmy and the masturbation thing haha; that was great.

I do like her almost hesitance but allure when she's around Zacky. It makes sense. Part of her is a bit unsure of him, but it's drowned out by her desire. I don't really blame Brian and Jimmy for being protective over her while she's around him, they don't exactly know everything that went on and I'm surprised that they're still as close to Zacky as they are (which I don't know if they are or not in the story, but I suppose I will find that out; I'm interested in hearing what excuses he came up with when they asked the questions).

More as soon as you can! :)