It was interesting. I couldn't really see where it was going. It seemed kind of like a whirlwind of emotions, but it was definitely intriguing to read. I am so sorry for responding so late. The winners will be announced in the comment section of my contest later today.
Where to begin when descrobong this? Wow. I don't know. There are so many things I love about this story. Be prepared for my gushiness. Haha :) Wow. Just WOW. Your writing style is FLAWLESS. I can't find anything I dislike about the story. I loved you little Oliver analogy. Hw people named 'Oliver' didn't fit his description. All the characters feelings of hate, spite, and resentment carried through to me, as a reader, perfectly. I felt like I was there. Like I could see everything that was happening. I can't wait to read your other Oliver story you were talking about in the first 'chapter', especially if this scene will be included. This was just amazing and I hope you win the contest. :)
Holy damn. Dude, this is AMAZING! You should continue it!!! And as far as editing and such goes, everything looked PERFECT!! And it made sense as well. I especially loved the ending! :) Love love love it!!! :)