You'll Never Know. - Comments

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! SUPER PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE YOUR "YOULL NEVER KNOW STORY" PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT SO FAR BUT YOU STOPED AT THE BEST PART!

Update please ya im makin a little list for u to update<3

Update update update UPDATE!!!!!

I love, love, love this story. I love the way its written and the perspective changes with the chapters, I also find the characters very interesting. LOL, is it weird I find Grayson oddly funny? Oh, and stroking invisible beards is made of awesome

This sounds interesting! I thought the strike through on the word fell was funny haha, I could just imagine him running around his house like a mad man trying to get ready. Great job :)

I like the opening. It was short sweet and to the point, yet vauge enough to be absolutely poetic and gorgeous. I loved it. Also, the layout is seriously adorable.

Chapter One

I shoved the chair out of my and frantically began shoving paper and school supplies into my bag, a knot of dread working it's way into my stomach.

Out of my....what? You forgot a line here, dolly. :)

I presume that the grey bag was his lunch....so why did he grab his lunch before he went to the bathroom?

Anyways, I really liked this. Some of the details made me giggle, and some just made me go, "Aww, this is cute." :)

I really cannot wait to see what comes of this. (: After asking to watch for silly grammar mistakes, the only other thing I can ask is that you update pretty please?(:

This has a lot of potential and is a nice read so far. <3 :)

Ahahaha, this was too funny. I really loved the strikethrough through "fell". Even though they can't be put in regular books they're too funny when they're in stories and I can just imagine this Grayson kid falling down the stairs. xD The rest of the chapter was really realistic and light, and not too cliched. Cliche really turns me off. I hate it when the guy/girl wakes up late for school and blah blah blah but the way you wrote it was what would really happen, I think. :)

I like the summary a lot, too. Especially the part about love being like falling on hard rocks. Because it is. People ignore the pain of love and you didn't. Good job. d(._.d)