Dude, that is not 'meh', silly child. See, this is another example of why you should get off your lazy ass and actually write some stories on here, instead of leaving the insanely good ideas to rot away on your computer! Now you do understand that if you don't do as i say, i will kick your ass, right? don't forget, i know where u live! *creepy smile*
Reading this gave me chills! I don't where this is going,all I know is that I really [like really] like this and really[like really] want to read more!
And you are not a shitty writer, keep with it girlfriend! :P