June 26th, 2008 at 11:47pm
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Awesome story. You're an amazing writer.
Tabloid Faces - Comments
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June 22nd, 2008 at 02:24am
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awesome story, I love the descriptions and I can't wait to read more :)June 4th, 2008 at 08:10am
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Really good.
I bet Brendan has a really sexii french accent :tehe:
More soon?April 22nd, 2008 at 11:23pm -
Ooh I'm excited for this story! =)March 11th, 2008 at 01:09am
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Lol, i really like audrey, she's really cool.
good story,February 9th, 2008 at 01:47pm -
FINALLY!
An Audrey Kitching story. XD
I was just about ready to write my own before you did...
:] feel proud. Feel very proud.
lol. This shit's great so far.
Update sooooooooonnn.
XDFebruary 4th, 2008 at 06:16am -
It was very well written. The summary really drew me in, and the beginning only made it better.
I liked how you showed hoe the model everyone thinks is so perfect has flaws as well. I liked your sense of descriptions, like:
It was filled to the rafters and was more star-studded than the night sky. The bar was free and was constantly buckling under the weight of brightly colored liquors. The club was pulsing with greed.
That was probably my favorite line in the entire story. I felt like I was there.
I can't wait to read more of this story. Please post more soon.February 3rd, 2008 at 06:47pm -
Any feedback would be pretty nice, thank you.
February 3rd, 2008 at 03:03am
More soon?