A Team of Extraordinary Gentlemen - Comments

I have to say that the most recent update, Chapter 45, was quite enjoyable. Your writing style is definitely getting better. There were some weird inconsistencies in some of your chapters(like when someone was kidnapped, but the bad guys left them a a weapon or when Scout went to sleep in side a Monster house). But with your warning in mind, I'd say the most recent chapters are a step up. I noticed how you set up Jake for his own little Russian romance, cool!

On a daily basis?
Oh my God, that's horrible. Is she able to have kids?
That's horrible. Scout sure is a trooper. I wish Jack would come back just so she could kick his ass and lock him away in prison. He should have gone to prison!

What the hell? An abusive ex boyfriend? That was quick! Did he die?

I thought Scout had been in foster care, but yeah, never mind it's possible to have a boyfriend, let alone an abusive one. But damn, that was a surprise.

I'm on Chapter 8 at the moment and I have to stay the story's good. You set up a situation and you're working to execute. I can't wait to get to the action bits because with a story like this I know that some crazy stuff will be going on.

My only possible critiques would be maybe use a tad bit more dialogue for some immediacy, but you're telling a good story. Keep up the work.

Well, this is definitely something that I don't read very often; I've seen a lot of these scenarios around - many characters from different movies/fandoms mashed together in one story - and they've interested me quite a bit, so I'd like to see where this one goes. I like the first chapter. It's as if Isaiah is really talking to the reader and explaining his life and everything that's going on. However, my con/crit for this story is that the layout is too...skinny. Skinny layouts are sort of hard on the readers eyes and it makes the story seem much longer than it really is. I also find that you have a few grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors here and there that could be easily fixed with the help of a beta. They can be found on the threads. Anyways, this story is nicely written; easy to read and fluid. I wish you luck with it!

What do y'all think of the new layout?

What do y'all think of the new layout?

What do y'all think of the new layout?

What do y'all think of the new layout?

hahah this is epic lol subscribes =)

Thank you!

This is very good! (:
Definately reading this!

This is actually really good!
I'm hooked!