Wow, is this something that you're just starting up again? I can tell that it's going to be really interesting of you do! Even though they were different lengths, I really liked both chapters! Chapter two felt a little mee intense and Zeek's character is portrayed really well, despite his harsh nature! Xx
Lemme just add in a lil' somethinggg. :p I noticed your status is: Active. ( I'm still trying to figure out how I'm going to do this, so give it awhile before there is regular updates.) try deciding what your going to write chapter by chapter and THEEEENNN write your story. just tryna help. :)