Deceitful - Comments

Continue please

loved it.

continue, please?

Loved this update. Can't wait to read more.

Well Zacky don't know what no means apparently and tht there is no need for the physical abuse to tell someone to listen to u, anyhoo Zacky is this talk necessary can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Zacky should know that when you want someone to listen to you--you don't slam the person against the wall. And, it seems he doesn't know the meaning of "get out" either.... Maybe he should listen to Brian.. and get out of his house..

Love it.

Poor Brian having to deal with Zacky's bullshit. Irene seems very annoying. I do wanna see Brian get back at Zacky though. I don't know what he plans on doing exactly but I'd love to see it.

Zacky needs to stop with the games and just admit that he was wrong and wants Brian back. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update as soon as you can.

:facepalm: Zacky seriously this whole gettin Brian jealous is gettin kind of old like seriously and on top of tht u chosen the most annoying person to try and make this jealousy happen, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Can't believe Zacky's still trying to make Brian jealous. I do think the tables should be turned---and that Brian should be trying to make Zack jealous.

Loved it. :)

Zacky is trying to make Brian mad

I ave a feeling that if Zacky is in fact trying to make Brian jealous that it's definitely just going to blow up in his face. I can't wait to see when that happens. Update when you can :)

Zacky's 'I'm goin to make Brian jealous by bring a girl to the hotel' plan will blow right in his face cuz Brian doesn't care at all Zacky now if Brian did tht to Zacky oh it would be good cuz Zacky would be jealous as shit right about now, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Zacky keeps digging his hole deeper. Before long he won't be able to get back out of it. I think Brian should be the one making Zacky jealous. I hope the whole plan blows up in Zacky's face. He is being an asshole about it. Can't wait to read more. Update as soon as you can.

How could Zacky bring a girl (Irene) on the bus when basically no one EVEN likes her? Zacky shouldn't even tried to make Brian jealous, because he should know that it won't even work on Brian. At all. Besides, I do think Brian has the right to make ZACK jealous... not the other way around. :)

Loved it.

Fucking a Zacky

I just hope Zacky remember everything he said to Brian, Brian forgives him and makes Zacky do some things to earn his trust and love back after the shit he pulled, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I wonder if Brian will forgive Zack for hurting him?

I hope he does.... and makes Zack do some things to earn his love and trust back..

Love it. :)

Zacky deserves to be hurting and suffering because he cheated on Brian with that bitch Mariah. I hope he realizes his mistake and does a lot of begging and pleading to get Brian to forgive him. I can't wait to see where this is going. Update as soon as you can.

Zacky build a bridge, get over it and grow the fuck up u ended the relationship with Brian, u r the one with the double standards, if u wanted to be back with Brian soo damn bad y the hell did u break up with him in the first place hmm u could have simply talk to each other about the situation at hand, Mariah and her sister, and thn once it's settle u r off of the break and back together but no it can't be tht simple u have to complicate it, u get drunk at a casino, have girls around u, get pissed when u see ur ex hooking up with another woman, u argue about tht and tell ur ex he can't do tht, thn u make a scene at a restaurant over pieces of lobster yea tht would definitely bring ur ex back to u Zacky, gosh stop being so childish, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Zacky needs to grow the fuck up. He is the one that ended things and now he is going to act like a child. Damn I think Brian can do better than that and deserves to be treated better. Please update as soon as you can.