One of the Gang - Comments

Holy Crap, I definitely did not see that coming at all!
Matt seem to have snapped when Athena fought back after he slapped her.
Since he hit not once but twice and then injected her with something.
And then he lied to Jimmy about her being there when she was.
I wonder what he will do now since he is dead set on keeping her by his side forever.
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I love this story but I do have one tiiiinnnnny criticism, the chapters are a little short. Other then that this story is great. Much love <3
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Matt shouldn't have hit her. Ugh he's such a dummy head grrr!!!! But btw I love the banners seriously they crack me up! :)

dude he's gonna hit her!? I hope she seriously beats the shit out of him right back!

loveddd the update :)

I just can't get enough of the pictures at the end!!!!! X3
Maybe Athena shouldn't have taunted Matt like that because he is known to have a very bad temper that can get out of control.
But Matt needs to understand that when someone is hurt like that, the person taking care of the person needs to remove all clothing to see that there aren't any other wounds that could be fatal.
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Moe please!!!!!# i really love this! An your others! Update soon

OMG I love the banners you put at the end of each chapter!
Especially this one, Matt is adorable! X3
Aw Matt got her another ferret and he also helped the new ferret!
So Athena is already falling back in love with him even though she hides it so good.
And she is starting to feel the way she did before all this gang stuff got in the way of their relationship.
Man it is a cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I cannot wait to find out what the problem is.
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Loved the banners!!!

Chapter 9: I do feel kinda bad for Matt, he's really trying his best and she's blowing him off everytime. Btw, loved the "Matt Approves" picture, totally made my night! lol XD
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Aw Matt bought her a grey ferret?????
She is so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
At least Matt is slowly showing his softer side, the one that Athena fell in love with.
I think the more Matt spends time with Athena and showing her that he could be the old Matt, I think she would fall in love with him again.
He needs to prove to her that he has changer for the good.
It may be slow but in the end it'll be worth because he got the girl he loved so much back in his arms.
I love the picture you put at the end!
You should definitely keep doing that!
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Holy Crap!!!!??? 0.0
He killed her dog and her old friends from high school?????
Man no wonder Athena ran away from him, and she walked in on him killing her old friend too.
That may have scarred her for life since she is still resentful making her life hell after he joined the gang and got greedy.
At least Jimmy got after Matt for him for almost hurting Athena and that he needs to get his act together or else he will lose Athena again.
I wonder what is the first thing is on his list?
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Omg Matt better not hit her, that's one of the reason why she ran away. Well at least she with her twin and Jimmy, Matt is such an asshole for bring her back to a lifestyle that she didn't want. Can't wait for the next update, hopefully sooner than later!

Aw Easter Egg Hunting, and they dressed up for the occasion!
SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! X3
But Matt has to really make Athena see that he really loves her and not be the complete ruthless asshole he has become.
Like for one keep his temper in check and understand that is exactly what drove Athena away.
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Wow Matt has really lost it because he kidnapped Athena and took her back when she was unconscious.
He really must have gotten attached to her when they were together since he went out of his way to find her and bring her back unharmed.
And now he is having flashbacks about the time they spend together.
He is really obsessed with Athena now!
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love the story just wish the chapters were longer! please do update soon!

Wow this is really good, I cant wait to see what happens next, Matts a bit of a douche though haha

<3 the Matt pic <3 Uh Oh though Matt got her!!!!! DX

OMG he finally got her!!!! 0.0
And the pic at the end is very sexy!!!!!
She should just stayed in the club instead of going out in the dark alley.
She was so close to disappearing again but Matt got to her and now he has her, and she is unconscious.
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Run away!!!!!! Lol love it!