Hiding in Plain Sight - Comments

I am sosososo SO glad you updated!

I'm super happy that you update :)

loved it :)

love the new update more please

do matt and val not know she smokes.....

I love this story alot. I'm glad Matt and Val are bonding with Lori and Ian :) more plesse

loved it!

Love this story at first I thought Matt would be a hugeee asshole, but im glad like he seems to be wanting to bond :) cant wait for more

loved it, im glad she is letting go of her role as ians caregiver, even though she isnt completely sure about it

Very, very good, I truly cant wait for more.

I like iiiit :3
update soon *

i love your story so far, its different :)
please update again soon
*suscribes*

aaawwww :) so sweet :) Can't wait for more :)

CREEPER STATUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^-^ I know a little boy named ian...four also, i just picture him when I read this lol, I really like Jimmy and Lori's little thing they have going there, I can't wait for more...I wan't to see what Lori's personality is like when she comes out a bit more :) *instant subscribe*

AWE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! All that I have to say... and that... and that and THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DARNDIT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANTED COMMENT VIRGINITY!!!!!!!!!! I WAS SO CLOSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ONLY 8 COMMENTS BEHIND!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LUV LUV LUV UR STORY!!!
UPDATE SOON PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really like this so far. I can't wait for more. I can tell its gonna be interesting :D

Still lovin it :) more soon?