Oh man, I just feel terrible for Toni, it's like she has no one but Pete and Audrey, I hope it works out but we all know things are messed up later, I can't wait to read more
Omg bb thank you for putting TWO of my stories up there, you're a dime ;) I didn't think this sucked at all. I thought it was a nice chapter because it included more present-day Toni than I feel like previous ones have. I'm still in love with their relationship and how much Pete cares for her. I hope they get to be together, and I hope her appointment goes well and that she doesn't chicken out or something (but I guess if she does that's okay too because she's uncomfortable). I'm sad you won't be able to update, but I'll try not to kill myself over waiting I love you anyway <333
Dear lord, I've patiently waited for an update and it was certainly worth it! I love how Toni and Pete's relationship just completely goes back to normal. And I just love their relationship in general and I love Pete he just makes my heart want to explode obviously. I can't wait for more this just made my day :D
This was so great, I felt such a sense of accomplishment and satisfaction when she beat Ben's ass to a bloody pulp. I just hope her actions don't have serious repercussions, and I hope now that she's told her mom and brother, and that Pete knows, and she got her revenge, that she'll be able to feel at peace again. And I hope she and Pete become bffs again obviously
I love to write fist fights, they're so full of raw emotions. The same happens with intense love-making or fucking or extreme sadness. I love to write angry pieces, full of someone's wrath. It's the best.
I'm so glad Pete knows now, it feels like a huge relief honestly. I feel pain in my heart for Toni, and for Pete because he's so angry and he doesn't know what to do for Toni to make it better. I just want everything to be happy for them, and I want Pete to fucking kick Ben's ass.
I can't speak I wanna cry because Pete and Toni and everything! Everything is so emotional; I'm emotional over babies and stories Im like a walking water fountain right now
@ sodapop curtis You know how I love my Wentz!! And yes it's on Mibba! I've rec'd it in one of my blog posts I think, it's really great. And I really do love this that much, probably a little too much. And I know I get the "ughhh how do I start this" too and I hate it. And hey any post is better than no post, it was worth me staying up to read!!
@ Ali Cat I'm sorry I posted this at an inconvenient time! I had a chronic case of "ughhhh how do I even start this chapter" until I forced myself to sit down and write it haha. I'm so glad you liked it so much, that makes everything worth it. Honestly I look forward to your feedback every time <3
I've never read Afraid of the Dark! Is it on Mibba or another site? I totally wanna check it out. I feel so special that you love this story that much, oh my gosh
Also, you will definitely get your closure. Some shit goes down in the next one BUT it is also a very Wentz-y chapter so I think you'll appreciate it.