Keep Playing Those Songs - Comments

  • This.Useless.Heart.

    This.Useless.Heart. (115)

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    I like the way you incorporated lyrics into it; it made it a lot more personal I think. Like I knew what songs the narrator was referring to. Pretty good drabble all in all.
    One error I caught: The lyrics one day will be meaningless and those familiar strums won't break me, well I can only hope for it. - run on sentence "well, I can only hope for it." should be it's own statement.
    August 18th, 2011 at 06:26pm
  • LAMBinLOVE

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    loved it! you're a pretty awesome writer :)
    June 18th, 2011 at 04:41am