WHAT IN THE HELL? WHAT ARE YOU WOMEN DOING TO ME?! Uhm, cmon. How could you? I mean, a cliffy like this? What the heck happened? What made him decide to go back? Where is Kale? How could it be worse? Answers!? Cmon now!
Holy god fucking dammit in heaven almighty. I'm in the verge of getting in my story machine thingie. I'm not even kidding guys. Why? That fucking monster. Jesus.
This is so wicked and twisted that I can't comprehend anymore. I've always loved stories like this, but this one is just too much. I hope everything will just be bright and stop being so dreadful anymore. Is it too much to ask? I know you guys still have many tricks up your sleeve but when it comes to the end I hope every single one is fixed.And Lassie and Kale will be happytogether.
Whoa what just happened? He attacked his brother, right? Momentarily lapse of sanity. I kinda like the voice in his head. He's amusing in a very very wrong way.
I'm so fucking confused. I thought I got it but then I realized that I really just don't get it. I mean, I kinda do, but there are a few chunks missing. This is insanity on like, 12 different levels.
I'm almost positive that I'll have nightmares tonight. That was creepy and not in the traditional scary way but in the 'holy fuck what the fucking hell, I've been irrevocably scarred' way. If that's what you were going for, great job.
I WANNA KNOW WHAT LASSIE WAS GONNA SAY! Jesus fuck. Why must you torture me so? But, yeah, this was kinda really emotional for me. REALLY. I don't even know why.
Aw, this story rocks!! I'm not really good at leaving comments but, uh, you guys rock. I'm glad I started reading this. I hope you update soon. Um… I love you? Anyway, this is cute/sexy/adorable/sad/sadistic, but it works. <3 Can someone get a tattoo please?