Love is More Than a Word - Comments

NikkiFoxy8 (100)

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Update soon!

July 27th, 2012 at 04:58am

MarriahShadz (100)

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I really like the story so far and I can't wait for the next update.

I would suggest going back to your first chapter and putting spaces in between the paragraphs to make it easier to read.

I also noticed you used the word "reframe" when I think you meant "refrain".
“Reframe from touching me unless necessary."

But other than those two things, I really enjoyed what you have posted so far and I'm looking forward to seeing what's going to happen between Amanda and Aaron.

July 6th, 2011 at 05:19am

tiffany danielle (100)

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Your detail is gorgeous. I really, really adorded reading this, missy. It felt so realistic, yet so fantasy enough to be an escape and I really enjoyed that. The only things I could possibly tell you to work on would be your grammar and your word choice - well, that and of course work on some updates!(: I want to read more of this amazingness! I have to know what happens to the freshly married strangers, okay? Okay. <33

Lovely job. <33 (:

April 4th, 2011 at 05:14am