I Wouldn't Change a Thing - Comments

I wasn't too sure if I was going to like this as I don't typically read these kinds of stories, however, once I started reading I really liked it. I love how you have put so much time and effort into making this story well written, it shows. I loved the tension as well, just of the whole chapter in general, it really kept me on edge the entire time, the fact that Annabelle is so human, and that she crawled into her childhood bed, as if to retreat and think things through, or as though she in a way wishes to return to the past when things were simpler. Overall, so far I really like this, I can see what all the fuss is about in the comments

pleaase please please start the new story !!! (:

i'm not a big fan of offspring stories, simply because it requires knowing the backstory; entering sometihng like this for comment swap just sort of leaves the reader unsure because we're not exactly willing to go back and read the prequel, then this. your writing style is nice and all, and the description :: dialogue is very nicely balanced and all, so it's not hard to read, i just don't understand it ;)

i hope you update soon and very soon. this story is fantastic

I really fell in love with your writing style, I hope you update soon!

I'm so god damn happy that you updated this! I love it! :D

Ahh, I want, no I need more of this in my life! When I got to the end of chapter 3 I was just like 'NO! DAMMIT!'

Ohh... ATL offspring? Kinda excited, can't lie. Love the prologue, by the way; wishing I knew the backstory. You should do a prequel or something. That story would be interesting to read. :)