Every Musician's Fan After the Curtain Goes Down - Comments

Hello! I've come from comment swap. I've never really read an MJ fanfic before and don't think I ever would have if I wasn't given this one. However, I'm glad that they gave me this one, it just shows me that I need to branch out of my comfort zone more. Lacey is quite an enjoyable character and it's a nice change to see how confident and outgoing she is. Keep up the good work.

giving it a try.. :)

This is rly good ! There's some minor mistakes with words, but it's so minor it doesn't even take away from the story. I like that the chapter is lengthy and I also adore how you're making Lacey seem realistic, as someone that you can relate to. Also, the layout is super pretty and I absolutely love the coloring of it !

I'm not a Micheal Jackson fan at all, but I really love the way you've created Lacey and I find her such a relatable character. Her confidence is amazing and the way she comes off in this story is amazing. Love your layout too, by the way!! ((:

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I've never read a Michael Jackson fanfiction before, mostly because I don't like him, but I found yours interesting. I loved the way you characterized Lacey. She's a great main character, and I've found I can relate to her very easily. Keep up the great work. Best of luck to you. xx

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I personally don't like Michael Jackson but I'll give this a try. I actually really like the confidence of the main character. Most main characters are insecure. It's a nice change. I also adore the layout. It's so stylish. Great work!

Comment Swap!! I'm happy that comment swap gave me a MJ fanfic, I didn't think there were any written anymore, so yay! I like the twist you put to the story, its a good change. I know this is going to be good, so update soon, don't take half a year again lol. Ummm yeah i don't have anything bad to say. Both chapters were great and gave enough information. Keep up the good work :)

Hi, I can't say I've ever seen a Micheal Jackson facfic before(not that I've looked, let's just say I'm not his biggest fan lol) but i kust say I'm reqlly looking forward to rewding this story! i can't wait for an update :)

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This is definitely the first Michael Jackson fanfic I've read! I thought the twist you've decided to take on this story is a little strange, bu I like it. You've given a good base to the story here, this could well grow into a really great story if you put some effort into it.

Good luck with your writing :)

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This story is strange.....but a good strange. I've never read a MJ story so it's definitely new territory. There were a couple of grammatical errors and I felt like the second chapter kind of fell short of the first one. Maybe that's just me but I loved the first one but I kind of started to get bored in the second one. You have nice characters. I liked the whole transformation idea that you had. I hope you continue the story. You are a good writer so good luck to you.

Hey I'm here because of Comment Swap I love the idea, I loved the first chapter, I loved every thing about the story I only have one problem with it the second chapter was really long and I couldn't really get into it properly due to how long it was and how short the first chapter was. It's really good though honest! Keep updating!

i love the narrator, Lacey, and her personality! i love the confidence she has, and the way she just drags you in. it was nice to read, and i'm very excited to see where the story ends up going! it should be quite interesting! updates soon please!

This was surprisingly easy for me to read. I'm not a big Michael fan but I do like the format of this story. There weren't too many grammatical errors and the layout was interesting. I really like the relationship Lacey and James have. Keep writing

I'm also not a big Michael fan fiction lover but I do enjoy his music a lot. The first chapter is short but it is really informative enough that it did not mater. I like the perspective you put on it. Whenever I think of MJ I think of his last few years so its nice to read a younger MJ. I am already liking the main characters but a little more description would be nice like what they look like. You did an amazing job with the emotions they are feeling however. Great job

I'm not gonna lie this isn't the first time I've read a fanfic about him, but I don't go searching for them. I do like this one though, definitely better than the last one. I love the way you built Lacey as a character and I the beginning I didn't think I was gonna be dragged in like I was. So, good job!

So, this is amazing so far. I reallllly love the fluidity of this and i also really love the descriptions. I never really thought about Michael Jackson like this, but it's verrry interesting. I really like your character development of the characters. keep writing this!

Not going to lie, I'm not a fan of Michael, but when reading this I really didn't feel like that mattered. Your writing was excellent and flowed really well.
You're very good at keeping the readers interested and I liked your characters a lot! :P Overall a really good story and you really should continue with it! :)

Allright, to begin with I am not a fan of Michael JAckson, but I like this story. The layout complents the story, the characters are realistic and beliveable, the dialog flows good, and everything just works together. This story is great. You have real talent, so keep up the good work!

Interesting. Is all I can think to say. I agree with @i'm a happy camper. I've never thought of Michael Jackson in that way, but I can see how one would. Your writing is very good and flows nicely when being read. I definitely felt a bit squeamish during the bathroom scene, so kudos to you for being able to pull that kind of emotion! :D

I'm not a big fan of Michael Jackson, nor have I ever looked at him that way but I like the voice of Lacey and think in a few ways she's actually quite relatable. I like this a lot, and hope you keep going with it in the future. Good job.