June 7th, 2012 at 05:32am
aw when this popped up for me in the comment swap I got so excited because I love Matt flyzik (hello mr. sexy) and all time low. even though a good portion of the story was set to be sad, the ending made me so happy. it was so cute, and adorable. and with Matt's speech, about him saying the accident showed him that life was too short, it really flowed well and made a lot of sense. it was logical, which sometimes stories can lack: being logical, or probable. but this was a well-written, probable one-shot. it was a quick read, an adorable one, and I almost wish it was a story! :-)
you're a good writer, so keep going! I hope to see some other stories of yours in the future :-)
- Olivia <3
P.S. normally this is the time I would subscribe, but since it's a one-shot there's really no point... so now I think I'll go check out some of your other stories! (if you have any posted, that is lol)
It was so awful when she found out about Matt being in a coma - very heartbreaking! :( I'm glad this story had a happy ending, though, and it ended so nicely and perfectly.