A Story to Tell Your Friends - Comments

  • morning glory.

    morning glory. (100)

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    Oh, wow, this was so cute. I mean, the coma... not so much, but the love story, yes. I actually don't know any of the famous characters, but that didn't affect the story for me. It was still very sweet and lovely. I really liked the photo idea!

    It was so awful when she found out about Matt being in a coma - very heartbreaking! :( I'm glad this story had a happy ending, though, and it ended so nicely and perfectly.
    June 7th, 2012 at 05:32am
  • olivelovable

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    aw when this popped up for me in the comment swap I got so excited because I love Matt flyzik (hello mr. sexy) and all time low. even though a good portion of the story was set to be sad, the ending made me so happy. it was so cute, and adorable. and with Matt's speech, about him saying the accident showed him that life was too short, it really flowed well and made a lot of sense. it was logical, which sometimes stories can lack: being logical, or probable. but this was a well-written, probable one-shot. it was a quick read, an adorable one, and I almost wish it was a story! :-)
    you're a good writer, so keep going! I hope to see some other stories of yours in the future :-)
    - Olivia <3

    P.S. normally this is the time I would subscribe, but since it's a one-shot there's really no point... so now I think I'll go check out some of your other stories! (if you have any posted, that is lol)
    June 7th, 2012 at 05:20am
  • Post-It

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    Awwww!
    That was brill, made me a little teary lol.
    Awesome one shot!
    May 12th, 2011 at 12:01am
  • Nialls Freckles

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    Well, that was damn adorable. :)
    April 6th, 2011 at 10:26pm