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Author [vampire_lover666]
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masked beauty
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This is a sad story, very touching and loving, yet intresting.
August 24th, 2011 at 11:21pm
Black Rose'97
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wow its really good.... very touching, had me in almost tears :')
August 10th, 2011 at 10:59pm
The Warden's Wife
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It was an interesting idea, a pretty good story.
Just needs a little more detail in the beginning (It went way too fast with way too little detail there) and spaces between the paragraphs that are different scenes.
April 5th, 2011 at 10:43pm
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