The Critical Sacrifice - Comments

I am a mess of emotions right now, that was the most heartbreaking, relatable piece of writing I've ever read. Coming from a girl who's growing up with a deceased father herself, I can honestly say I have never cried this hard before over a piece of writing. You completely nailed the themes and your flawless writing, grammar and sentence structure only compliments the piece further!

Hi! I'm from comment swap :) This story was the most touching that I've read in a long time. It made me smile, just out of the love shown from the women, but at the same time, it almost brought tears to my eyes. It was absolutely wonderful. Keep writing, can't wait to read more from you.

I don't even know how to express this story without sounding like the other comments. So, I'll just say something like, "Ditto."

Altogether, this is really well written, and I like the format you used. There's slight spelling/grammatical errors throughout, but nothing to really complain about.

I thought it was very dramatic and fitting that "Daddy" would be her daughter's first word. I was stony-faced through the whole thing, but when that happened, I cracked a little.

Good work. It was really enjoyable to read, albeit sad. (:

This story..... It's wonderful. It really makes your emotions flip, from sad, to happy when that child speaks.... Truly moving... Beautifully written.

This story is really amazing.
It moved me.
<3

Oh my God... Lauren, you're the best!
I felt like crying while reading it, it's so sad and moving, and so beautiful... I don't know what to say, I love every single word of it.
It's amazing!
XoXo <3

Oh my God, your story is so... amazing! It's pretty. Really, it moved me. God... Don't know what to do, don't know what to say. Fantastic.