Tales From Battery City - Comments

hehe please continue this i wanna reaad more!!!! its seems like it would be a really good story!!!! :)

1. I love your layout
2. Why did you make it so short haha I wanted to read MORE!
3. I love the realtionships expressed in this. So lovely *tear*
4. you HAVE to continue this.. Soon! Ok sorry.. Pushy :)
I jut love any killjoy fic because I just think Gees whole idea of them is just teriffic! I can't wait for more of this.. Seriously. I'll be waiting babe.

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This would make a really good full chaptered thing, I love how vulnerable they both seem in this :) I encourage you to continue this!

First off, I adore the layout for this. I'm usually not a fan of layouts that aren't centred but this one just looks great. I love the whole idea of doing a series based off of Danger Days as well; even though you only have the one chapter submitted for my contest, I'm going to subscribe because it sounds interesting.

The first chapter was great. It makes sense that it is short, since LAS is only thirty seconds or so long, but you managed to convey quite a bit about Gerard and Mikey's characters. Overall, thank you for entering it in my contest, I will be subscribing now. (:

Please continue :) LOVE THIS!!