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  • Toy Soldier

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    its really cute!!
    you should make it longer, if you can...
    but L-O-V-E I-T!!!
    February 4th, 2008 at 12:53am
  • Oli.

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    OH SO CUTE!

    I'd be shit scared of handing it into school though...my english teacher realy dusnt like me
    February 3rd, 2008 at 09:47pm
  • Your Addiction

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    Chapter it! I'd definately read. It's amazing so far. Hope your teacher likes it.
    February 3rd, 2008 at 07:38pm
  • I Think Ur A Contra

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    Frank + Quinn = In Love

    I love it already. Very interesting. I definitely think you should expand it. x]

    xoxox Adalia
    February 3rd, 2008 at 06:30pm
  • Sick of Feeling Sick

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    It was not shit, it was very, very good! I'm not sure how your teacher will feel about it, I know mine might be a little turned off by it, but I thought it was excellent!

    If you do turn it into a chapter story, I will definitely read it! = ]
    February 3rd, 2008 at 06:24pm
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