March 11th, 2012 at 01:35pm
I loved this story - read it nonstop
I have to say, though, that my favorite thing about this story was Aiden ... he stuttered around everyone , about everything .... but with Alisa , he didn't and I found that to be adorable . I could tell They loved each other even before Aiden admitted or :3
I really wish there could be a sequal , that'd be freak
your writing is amazing , although in my opinion you put too much detail it's not a big deal I just feel as if EVERY little thing is mentioned it gets too visual but I understand that visual imagery is good , but besides that I loved it