How does this story have no comments. I'm actually really surprised at this.
This was intelligently written, and in good taste. I love your use of words and how there was a surprise at the end, though sad. I really liked this little story, and I think you did a great job on it. It wasn't too wordy, which is good.
This was intelligently written, and in good taste. I love your use of words and how there was a surprise at the end, though sad. I really liked this little story, and I think you did a great job on it. It wasn't too wordy, which is good.
I think that I'll read another of your stories.