AWWWWWWWW THIS IS SOO CUTE<3 I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE THIS :) i usually hate the whole were wolf/twilight/ anything fucking fantasy BUT I REALLY LOVE THIS <3 AND A SEQUEL YAAAAAAAAY like sapph comign back *gasp* i love your writing and this story goood job :*
Please do a sequel, it would be awesome. I love your characters and how they connect, this is a great story and I really do think you should carry it on :D
OmG! If i wake up tomorrow and there isn't an update I might die of suspense... just saying you wouldn't want to be held accountable for my death, I'm kinda a big deal...
To be honest, I like sex too. But I'm going to say that in the most political way possible. I don't like it when there are stories about teenagers and all they do is kiss because let's face it, in reality kids are having sex at like 15, 16 years old now. I just hate when I read a teen-based story and there's no sex. I'm not asking for a raunchy sex scene with lots of hardcore action, I'm just asking for a health dose of REALITY when it comes to things like that. Unfortunately, teen stories don't get published if they have sex in them and that's just the cold hard truth. People view it as "bad" and I wished they wouldn't.
I mean, the way I introduced sex into my story didn't seem all that threatening, did it? I thought it was rather beautiful and added to the story.
Sorry, but I had to comment. I'm ferociously passionate about this topic and I kind of want to spread some awareness. You know? Hopefully one of these days people can open up their minds a little.
Lol! Cookie! I love how you took this lovely beautiful connection between my characters and turned it into a dick measuring contest... SHAME ON YOU! That was supposed to be HEART wrenchingly sad and yet happy at the same time!
Yaaaaaaay! They bumped uglies! :) I can only imagne how much more shes going to be in the morning. You know werewolves prolly pack more than the average teenage boy ;)
Ok. This is what I think is going to happen. Rain is going to get the book from Diego, and Coale is going to fail the test. They're going to get in a full blown out wolf fight and somehow Rain gets involved in it. She makes this huge speech or something and then tells them SHE'S PREGO WITH COALE'S CHILD. The law gets passed (werewolves are allowed to marry anyone) and Sapph becomes the Head of Werewolves. Good or bad? Close?
Just started reading this story and I'm caught up! I am so in love with this story! I wish I could meet someone like coale! Their love is so pure and real! You have no idea how excited I am for the next chapter! And you show know that you are a very talented writer! You have a special gift! Keep it up!