If I Could Gather Up The Nerve, I'd Put My Feelings Into Words - Comments

i'm sobbing oh my god. i couldn't even picture the boys crying, though. or even remotely sad. this was really, really good.

another amazing update form you, honestly it was brilliantly written as always and nearly had me in tears as if i was at the funeral as well. I could actually picture everything in my mind so well it was so moving and so sad btu so good to.

kepp it up best friend =]

Awh this chapter was so sad but really well written! Good job!

Sooo... Guess who has tears in their eyes?
Me, of course.

You're an evil one, Lottie, for letting a story be this emotional only two chapters in.
but it's just too good not to read :P

I really hope this cheers up soon, because all this emotional, crying stuff is getting to me :') Especially the part with Petie and Patrick, oh dear god, I'm pretty sure my heart broke </3
More soon please
xo

Aaw, bby, you made it so sad :(
If you're gonna try to make me cry - don't! ;)

So perfectly written, lovely, and I can just tell you're going to make this an amazing plot and story :)
Chapter 2 asap, yeah?
xo

Wow this is really really good!!! Thanks for linking it to me! It's such a good start and so so well written!
This is going to be amazing!

Can't wait for more!!!

wow this is already amazing, that first chapter is written perfectly, so sad unfair but also a great start to what is no doubt going to be another one of your amazing stories =] can't wait to read more........

my amazing and talentful best friend !!!!

Amely
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All Time Low
I
Think
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Might
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Might
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I'm soooooo excited, hurry it uuup!