Black Sheep Come Home - Comments

are you going to update soon you guys?? I just want to give this story a big sloppy kiss mwah (I am thinking of yuri as in pleskun just with dark hair oops)

Tabitha Pearlina Jones, twenty years old. My heart keeps beat-beat-beating, but I don’t think I’m alive.
This line made me jizz my pants. It's fucking awesome.

I love this. You need to update.
I don't know what's going to happen next and its killing me.
I wanna know how this thing ends and I'm going to need your help.
You are brilliant.

update!

i really should update this i'm trying i really am

i like tabitha and her blue hair

what the fuck is this when did you create this brilliance jesus christ hahaha. oh my goddddd i love it alksdfjfja;sd js lkdfj

:))=)) Well, it was fun writting that comment and I kinda...uhm...put weird words everywhere. It was a momentary trance induced by your story:D It passed quickly( I was upset because it entered my brain and left it too quickly:|) But I kinda liked how it ended up in the end :)) .And...yeah, you shouldn't be afraid you understood it=)). I don't...I did then:))=))
Does it make sense, again, what I'm blabbering about in here?
And be sure I'll praise you both to all my friends, even though those cocky adolescents/ dumb doras/ fucked up dudes don't know english. Oooh well....

Hmmh, two writting styles, different 360 degrees and not as different as how Tabitha and Romy are. Tabitha Pearlina Jones( was it?) is such an...an adolescent. Well, yeah, she is an adolescent after all, but I don't mean it like that, as simply...adolescent...but in a superior way. Does it make sense? She's not your tipical chick/ghost: she speaks like a bitch and describes things like a bitch, but, well, isn't she? She used to be normal(right?), but normal isn't normal anymore when you talk about Tabitha. That's what I like about your style,lula christ:D.You have a few screws loose in your head, but, hey, all geniuses have:D.
Romy is a tipical loser/chick(or is she a cool chick?) and that's just the thing I like about her. She is a bitch( as is Tabitha and don't you think that this thing makes them terribly alike, Tabitha and Romy?) and acts like one, or at least, only when Tabitha's name leaves anybody's lips.It's cool, really:D
Uri...well, Uri is Uri and because he is so skinny and hateful toward the chick/ghost that haunts him, he is Uri:)). Makes sense?
Harper; he's your tipical cool dude/ vulnerable dude. That's why he completes Romy and why they're perfect for each other. Except he's not over the chick/ghost, which means that he is a bitch, as is Tabitha and as is Romy. And, why not, as is Uri:))
If this comment doesn't make sense, you're right in your head. It makes sense for me:)). Understand now?
This story needs some publicity:D
You're inspiring, damn adolescents...

and of course, this puts both me and my writing to shame <3

cool