Whataya Want From Me - Comments

I love this story. I made sure to suscribe. How does everyone add a little saying or whtever under their comment? I wanna do that.

Please update this story soon?

Well. Thats hot :D Love it

please update soon! i love this story. :D

Les, this is really good from what I've read so far :p
Bravo, and I shall be back to read more :p

Update faster!! I need it, it's like a drug! Please? I love the update, I love how she's so unsure about everything

Once again I must inform you that I love this story and you're an amazing writer! Please continue updating!

Excellent. :3

i think that you are on to something good.
it seems a little rushed, but it has fantatic potential .
_aku-sensei.

This is pretty good. I like the originality of the plot line and I like the way in which you wrote it, but something about it all just doesn't quite flow. i'm not saying that it's bad, I'm just saying that it is kind of hard to get in to, but you make up for that in originality.

I'm really interested to see what happens to Erica and her relationships. I can't wait to see more that you have in store. :)

Wow! I'm really loving where this is going!!!!

Yay! I love it!!!!

Huh. Interesting plot, for one...it's definitely unique :) I'm having a love/hate relationship with your style; on the one hand, it's really simple and that lends this incredible sense of realism. On the other hand...that simplicity is because all your sentences are the same length, which is hurting the flow.
Maybe try to switch it up a bit sentence length wise, but still try to keep that simplicity?
Overall though, this is a nice plot!

To be honest I got a bit confused at a couple parts, also, the plot's not really my thing. Other than that though I don't have any complaints, so I guess that it wasn't too bad really.

I really liked this!

It's different from what I've read and what you have so far really has me hanging on for more! I'm looking forwards to more additions :)

Keep up the good work!

This is really interesting!

It's certainly very different from all the other femmeslashes that I've read, and what you've got so far really works and I look forward to seeing how it develops for Erica and the other girl, as well as the effect it has on her boyfriend as well! It's interesting reading about someone trying to figure themselves out, as much of what I've seen around is very straight forward - "I'm a lesbian and hey, that's okay". It's a great change to see someone, particularly someone who I relate to so well as a character already, try to work out who they are instead of already knowing and being comfortable with it.

"I have no idea how to love."
This was definitely the phrase which stood out to me the most, as it touched me very close to my heart. It's something that I certainly feel, and I'm sure many other people do, so seeing it expressed so honestly was very refreshing and quite comforting, in a way. The idea of love scares a lot of people and it's fantastic just to see it portrayed so openly.

I love it! Keep going!